A day with you – by Tosin Akinro

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Comments (7)
  1. Wale says:

    Nix Poem

  2. Victoria - says:

    I love this

  3. Spectacular….#DEEP

  4. Anonymous says:

    Uhmmm…nice poem, but may I chip in something and not sound mean??? Look at it as constructive criticism, the repeating last line sounds so childish…at least to me….. Apart from that….. The poem's pretty much awesome… Love you Tosin

  5. Anonymous says:

    No one criticizes a composer for repeating the same notes or lyrics in a song, there's liberty in arts, that's why it's called arts, nice poem .

    1. Anonymous says:

      I'm sorry, I'm not trying to be mean or anything, but I'm just trying to say that the last line of that poem sounds like what a primary school child would write….. If you had written this in a journal or somewhere that's not meant for public viewing,i wouldn't mind if i saw it… But its on someone 's blog…. Its a nice poem.. But I'm trying to offer my honest opinion.i think its childish cause of the last line… I'm sure That even tho its my opinion.., I'm probably not the only one sharing that train of thought.. Try to be more creative and imaginative is all i am trying to say .and…..what's life without criticism??